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Friday, August 21, 2020
Why you should not have school on Monday š¦„
Hi this is my persuasive arguments on why we should skip school on Monday. we had some to write a persuasive arguments on something about school. I chose why you should skip school on Monday because they are really terrible. I hope you like it. š¦„
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Hello Ella, I am Nicholas from waikowhai primary school. When I first saw this post I exppextcted it to be less persuasive then this was. I dissagree with you still, though I think it should maybe be a half day once fortnightly or somthing. But I understand your position on this argument. If you want to you can cheek out my blog at https://wpsnicholasco.blogspot.com/
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Salaam Ella W
ReplyDeleteMy name is Amara and I am in Waitemata from Waikowhai Primay School. WOW! I really liked your persuasive about not going to school on Monday. It reminds me of when I did a persuasive about should animals be banned from zoos? Maybe next time you could share the persuasive text with your principal and see if he or she agrees. Visit my blog on http://wpsamaram.blogspot.com/.
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