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Friday, June 26, 2020

Mars

Hi this is my reading task. We had to read Mars to get facts from it then put it in a video.  I hope you like it. :-)
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  1. AnonymousJune 26, 2020 at 12:44 PM

    Hi,my name is Paityn and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you made something about mars. Mars is my favourite planet. It was intersting to find out that if you take 1 breath on Mars, you will die. Maybe next time you could add some pictures to make it look more great. It reminds me of when I watched a space documentry about planets. I would like to go to Mars one day because its orange! If you want to checkout my blog go to https://wpspaitynw.blogspot.com/. Hope you have a good day blog ya later.

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    1. AnonymousAugust 7, 2020 at 9:52 AM

      Thank you for the comment, I really like the feedback you gave me. I will go and visit your blog. Thank you for the amazing feedback

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