Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 12, 2020
SpAcE Station
Hi this is Space Station writing. For literacy we had to create a piece of writing about an international space station. Then we had to create a before and after then we had to create a before and after screencastify. On the after that is when we our work I hope you like it.
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Hi Ella, This was a great report writing! What did Jimmy do when he landed? I really like this story! Maybe next time you can try to space the wrds like make the doc bigger!
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