Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, June 22, 2020
Moon Disaster Plan
Hi this is my Moon Disaster plan. The teacher showed us a picture and that is what our story was about. This is my plan but I will post my finished writing soon! I hope you like it. :D
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Ella!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described what you were doing and how you did your plan. What was you favourite thing about your plan? Great Job :D
-Tilly :P
Hello, My favourite bit was the alians bit. Thank you for commenting. :-)
DeleteAnytime Friendie :-D
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